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--Where Hearts Dream Tonite-- by ~thewronged:iconthewronged:



the tiny little figures, danced across the keys
and in the way they moved, was comforting to me
for the beauty in their pirouettes, and in their dips
made me think of whispers, dancing on your lips

they moved with such, grace and purity
it made me think, they simply danced for me
they had wings of silver, and when they moved away
it made you think that darkness, had claimed the light of day

they weeved and bounced, along the waters edge
and when they seemed to finish, they started up again
my hands reached for them, and pulled apart their wings
but the creatures meerly danced, as if i was the dream

but they could not last forever, in this pagentry of light
for every thing that lasts eternity, eventually must die
so i buried the beauties, of that summer's dream
but i found myself a souvenir, when i found the beauties wings

so i wrapped up the memories, of that dreams lovely night
and i bought a single rose, and planted it at first light
and every evening hense, when the sun sets in the sky
i think about mortality, and even beauty must one day die.
©2004-2009 ~thewronged
:iconthewronged:

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just a random poem. hope you like it. about dreams. and dying.

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:icontearsoftorment:
Astonishing.

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When It Gets Too Much, I Need To Feel Your Touch, I'm Gonna Run To You.
:iconthewronged:
gracias.

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Oh my god you've got to tell me
with stainless steal agaisnt your head
I'll paint this barrel blood fucking red. We've all been scratched. We've all been tainted.
:icon11th-hour:
:jawdrops: what hell you talkin bout this not being your best *picks up brick* why i outta spank ya till yere blistered and the color of a skittle bag!

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blah, blah, blah yea fun blah

craptastic stock :icon7th-guest:
:iconthewronged:
so not my best.

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Oh my god you've got to tell me
with stainless steal agaisnt your head
I'll paint this barrel blood fucking red. We've all been scratched. We've all been tainted.
:icon11th-hour:
i still love it

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blah, blah, blah yea fun blah

craptastic stock :icon7th-guest:
:iconbluefireangel25:
i love it too. i think this is my favorite line "made me think of whispers, dancing on your lips." =)

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*´¨)
¸.·´¸.·*´¨) ¸.·*¨)
(¸.·´ (¸.·' whitney
:iconglorygiven:
i love the imagery in this poem...especially in the first line....its sorta sad but very realistic at the same time...
:iconchickentaco101:
very nice metaphors. I think I've liked your other poems better, but as far as being well written and lovely, this is awesome.
:iconlovryoudonthavtolove:
my god, shane, you have no idea how much i wish i had the ability to create imagery the way you do...this is so incredible....

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i drug your ghost across the country and we plotted out my death...in every city memories would whisper "here is where you rest"

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